A DBQ ESSAY: STEPPING TOWARD LIFE GOALS

       The Role, Responsibility

       and Reality of Parenting

Learning Experience by Carol Nochajski, Alden High School, Alden NY School District

Member of the New York State Academy for Teaching and Learning

1.  LEARNING CONTEXT:

 

PURPOSE: The goal of this learning experience is for students to develop a realistic personal vision of themselves in a role of a quality parent or citizen positively influencing youth.  Developing personal vision fosters a sense of control over one’s life.

 

·        Students must be able to support a thesis by analyzing information from the documents as well as including related outside information and experience.

·        Students must be logical and organized as they present their points to the reader.

 

The letter writing is an authentic task, a written document of the writer’s goals in the role of a quality parent or citizen influencing the positive development of youth.  The target audience is the writer’s child of the future.  The task is engaging because students are required to look at family from the parental perspective. It is health enhancing for the students as they take a stand for good parenting and citizenship.

 

The task a summative assessment at the culmination of a Family Life and Human Sexuality Unit in a 10th grade .5 credit, required health class.

 

Guiding Questions:

·                    What are the roles / responsibilities that adults assume when they become parents?

·                    What are the consequences of parenting practices on children, the family and society?

·                    How do understanding theories of human growth and development and youth development approaches affect adult choices in relating to children?

·                    What care giving conditions are necessary to promote a child’s health, safety and positive development?


 

STANDARDS AND COMMENCEMENT LEVEL INDICATORS:

 

Health Education National Standards

 

Standard 3:  Students will demonstrate the ability to practice health enhancing behaviors

and reduce health risks.

1.         Analyze the role of individual responsibility for enhancing health.

 

Standard 6:  Students will demonstrate the ability to use goal-setting and decision-making

skills to enhance health.

1.                  Demonstrate the ability to utilize various strategies when making decisions related to health needs and risks of young adults

 

Family and Consumer Science Education National Standards

 

15.0                     Evaluate the impact of parenting roles and  responsibilities on

                        strengthening the well-being of individuals and families.

15.1                            Analyze the role and responsibilities of parenting.

15.1.2                                                      Examine the expectations and responsibilities of parenting

15.1.3                                                      Determine consequences of parenting practices to the individual, family and society.

15.2                            Evaluate parenting practices that maximize  human growth  and  

                                    development.

15.2.3                                                      Assess common practices and emerging  research about

              discipline on human growth and development.

 

NYS Health, Physical Education and Family and Consumer Science

 

Standard 1:  Students will have the necessary knowledge and skills to establish and maintain physical fitness, participate in physical activity and maintain personal health.

H A      Understand human growth and development throughout the life cycle.

H C     Apply prevention and risk reduction strategies which can delay the onset or reduce the risk of potential health problems into adulthood.

H D     Evaluate how multiple influences which affect health decisions and behaviors can be altered.

 

Standard 2:  Students will acquire the knowledge and ability necessary to create 

                        and maintain a safe and healthy environment.

H A      Recognize hazardous conditions in the home, school, (workplace, and community) and propose solutions to eliminate or reduce them.

H B      Evaluate personal and social skills which contribute to health and safety of self and others.

H C     Recognize how individual behavior affects the quality of the environment

FCS C Understand the essential requirements for selecting and maintaining a (nurturing) home (family)

 

NYS Health Education Skills Matrix –Commencement Level

 

Decision-Making- Demonstrates the ability to apply decision-making strategies and skills to enhance personal, family and community health.

DM.C.1           Identifies personal decisions and analyzes related internal and external influences.

DM.C.3           Gathers and synthesizes available information

DM.C.4           Personalizes risk of decisions to self and others

DM.C.5           Analyzes perceptions of peer, family and community normative behavior

DM.C.6           Predicts short and long term benefits and harmful consequences of personal decisions.

 

Planning & Goal Setting –Demonstrates the ability to apply planning and goal-setting strategies and skills to enhance personal, family and community health goals.

PG.C.5                       (Evaluates) and amends a personal goal

PG.C.11         Analyzes the impact of decisions on personal goals

 

Advocacy – Demonstrates the ability to apply advocacy strategies and skills to enhance personal, family and community health.

AD.C.5           Gathers, assesses and synthesizes evidence to support a health enhancing position.

 

NYS English Language Arts

 

Standard 1:  Students will read, write, listen and speak for information and understanding.

1D      Make distinctions about the relative value and significance of specific       

data, facts and ideas

2A     Write and present research reports, feature articles and thesis / support 

            papers on a variety of topics related to all school subjects

2D      Support interpretations and decisions about relative significance of  

information with explicit statement, evidence and appropriate argument.

Career Development and Occupational Studies

 Standard 3a:  Students will demonstrate mastery of the foundation skills and competencies essential for success in the workplace and other settings.

A         Use a combination of techniques to read or listen to complex information and analyze what they hear or read; convey information confidently and coherently in written or oral form; (and analyze and solve mathematical problems requiring use of multiple computational skills.)


 

CONNECTION

 

This Document Based Question is written for the ½ credit 10th grade required health course, commencement level.  It is used as an independent writing assignment  at the end of a Family Life Unit that includes: marriage, sex education, STD’s, teen pregnancy and a 48 hr. simulated parenting performance task using computerized infant manikins. The task is modeled after and supports the Global Studies required DBQ.

 

The learning experience is relevant because we know that the “glue” that has traditionally connected families is often weakened today.  Families are smaller, grandparents have often moved away, the divorce rate is soaring, increasing numbers of children are spending time in single parent families, increasing numbers of mom’s have full time jobs and youth are spending more time in unsupervised settings. Today many of our young people may not have the opportunity to observe young children and focus on the role of parenthood. The secular trend shows that our youth are sexually mature and able to reproduce at younger ages.  We live in a culture that seems to glorify sexuality but the reality is that young people need to postpone sexual involvement and become better educated in preparation for the good jobs.

 

This activity reflects “best” classroom practice because it supports continuing research (The Search Institute).  The exercise fosters the development of a personal vision in youth.  Looking ahead and considering the future before making personal decisions can cause youth to consider the long-term consequences of decisions rather than relying on perceptions of the immediate. Our young people can increase their sense of control over their lives. The goal of this writing exercise is for students to develop realistic expectations of themselves in a role of a quality parent or model citizen positively influencing youth.


 

KNOW AND DO TO SUCCEED

 

Items taught prior to the DBQ:

·                                Checklist of Developmental Assets –for self-awareness

·                                40 Developmental Assets (mental health unit)

·                                The Impact of Developmental Assets

Acquired as a result of the learning experience:

·                                Practice the DBQ process for Global Studies regents exam

·                                Conscious, thoughtful consideration of self in future role as parent

 


 

2.  PROCEDURE

 

The Document Based Question is an independent writing activity to be done outside of class.

The teacher:

·        Explains and defines DBQ process.

·        Reviews documents, graphic organizer and rubric with student input for clarification.

·        Provides a model DBQ to be reviewed and assessed to clearly articulate expectations.

·        Provides individual mentoring, as needed.

 

The students:

·        Analyze documents by constructing short answer responses to Scaffolding Questions

·        Use graphic organizer to organize thinking about the analysis of documents as well as related outside information and personal experience to support thesis.

·        Use all documents and cite them.

·        Reflect on changes in personal perception of readiness for the responsibilities of parenting.

·        Use rubric to self-assess.

·        Word process a final copy for submission.

 


 

3.  INSTRUCTIONAL / ENVIRONMENTAL MODIFICATIONS

 

All students have been able to complete this task .The task has been easily modified by decreasing the number of documents for some students. I have required that students with modifications must analyze Documents #1 and #2. Scaffolding Questions for some of the other documents require that students make a comparison to Document #1 and #2.


 

4.  TIME REQUIRED

 

Planning and preparation for the teacher:

·                    Lessons in previous classes on developmental assets  (80 min)

·                    Duplication of student packets: (20 min)

·                    Explanation of DBQ Essay Assignment (15 min)

·                    Assessment of individual DBQ Essays (2 hours per class)

 

Planning and preparation for the student:

·                    Previous class activity information on developmental assets. (80 min)

·                     Previous experience using infant simulator and written reflection on the experience (50 hours)

·                    DBQ Essay (1 hour)

Analyze documents and answer Scaffolding Questions

Think and organize ideas. Use Data Boxes, graphic organizer.

Write essay.  Revise. Rewrite

Use Rubric to self-assess performance.


 

5.  RESOURCES

 

·        Hughes, Langston. “Mother to Son” http://mbhs.bergtraum.k12.ny.us/cybereng/matoson.html

·        Kiker,Douglas. Federal pressure on deadbeat parents is getting results. http://seattletimes.com/news/nation-world/html9

·        Mandi, “Crisis: My Brother,” The Diary Project, http://www.diaryproject.com/topics/tamily/entries/19632.shtm  4/25/00

·         The Search Institute. “40 Developmental Assets,”  http://www.search-institute.org/assets/forty.html

·         The Search Institute. “The Power of Assets,”http://searchinstitute.org/research/assets/assetpower.html


 

6.  ASSESSMENT PLAN

 

Formative Assessment Strategies

Self-Assessment and scoring of Developmental Assets in previous lessons

Observations of student comments during class discussion

Summative Assessment Strategies

Students submit the following work samples:

Written Responses to Scaffolding Questions

Planning – Completed graphic organizer  -“Data Boxes”

Completed DBQ Essay

Completed Rubric

Summative Assessment Rubrics

Sample Top Score Responses to Scaffolding Questions

Specific Rubric for Scoring DBQ Essay

(-teacher developed with student input for clarification)


 

7.  STUDENT WORK

 

Student Sample A, B, C and D are in a separate section

Rubric for scoring


 

8.  REFLECTION 

 

When I created this project I had been using the Search Institute’s 40 Developmental Assets for a couple of years as part of self-awareness in a mental health unit.  I strongly believed that learning about assets would be personally helpful to my students. Developmental assets are a powerful influence and useful tool because they are simple, clear and can be covered in a short period of time. However, I wanted to make the learning more memorable and foster the development of a personal vision of self from a parental perspective.

 

I also had been engaged in interdisciplinary thinking, contemplating ways to help my 10th grade students rehearse for the required and dreaded DBQ on the N.Y.S. Global Studies Regents Exam.  Analyzing the assets information seemed like a great idea! Additional documents to be analyzed in the DBQ were a mystery to me!  I had seen only professionally constructed social studies documents and the documents were brief and specific.  What could I use for a variety of parenting type documents that would encourage students to write and reflect on themselves in the parent role?  Documents in the 1st draft were longer than I wanted, resulting in a somewhat cumbersome Student Packet.  Later revisions involved insertion of shorter documents, personally drawing pictures and writing some of the document to avoid headaches with copyright laws. I found that modification to the selection of document changed the standards and/or performance indicators that I was assessing.

 

Informal dialog with students has enabled me to see flaws in the learning experience from the students’ perspective. I have noted misunderstandings as I read completed essays, and have continued to revise.

 

All resources are web sites. I’m preparing to place this work on the web to use instructional technology.

 

The DBQ process seems to provide a way to facilitate long-term retention, higher level thought processes and this particular learning experience fosters development of a realistic vision of the parent role among youth.

 

Name____________________________________________________________ Date_____________________________  Period_________

 

RUBRIC:  Stepping Toward Life Goals: The Role, Responsibility and Reality of Parenting!

 

Dimension

4     40/20 Personal Vision

3     20/20 Personal Vision

2     Glasses Must be Lost

1     Needs Glasses

Response to Essay Question

The degree to which the student evaluates personal & social skills that contributes to the personal health & safety of self and others.

H1C, H2A,B,C,  FCS2C,

NH 3.1,3.3,6.1,6.3, NFCS 15.1.2,3, 15.2.1,3,  AD.C.5, DM.C.3,.6                          

                                                    (X2)                                                    

Developed clear, insightful, realistic vision of:

·          the role, responsibility and reality of parenthood,

·          essential requirements to meet the personal health & safety  of all family members and maintain a nurturing home,

·          long term benefits and harmful consequences of personal decisions.       

                                                                         8                                    

Developed a clear vision of :

·          the role, responsibility and reality of parenthood,

·          essential requirements to meet the personal health and safety of all family members / maintain a nurturing home,

·          long term benefits and harmful consequences of personal decisions6                                                    

Developed a shadowy vision of:

·          the role, responsibility and reality of parenthood,

·          essential requirements to meet the personal health & safety of all family members/ maintain a nurturing home,

·          long term benefits and harmful consequences of personal decisions.

                                                                  4

Developed a weak vision of :

·          the role, responsibility and reality of parenthood,

·          essential requirements to meet the personal health & safety of all family members and maintains a nurturing home,

·          long term benefits and harmful consequences of personal decisions2

Personal Reflection on Parenting in Essay

The degree to which the student connects risk reduction strategies with human growth and development knowledge and sets realistic expectations of parenthood.

H2C,  NH 3.1,6.1, NFCS 15.1.2, 15.1.3  PG.C.5,.11, DM.C.3,.4   (X2)                  

·          Effectively incorporates outside information and prior human growth and development knowledge to support and extend issues revealed by the documents.

·          Personalizes risk of decisions to self and others.

 

                                                                     

                                                                       8

·          Adds outside information and prior human growth and development knowledge in the construction of the essay and analysis of the documents.

·          Personalizes risk of decisions to self and others.

                                                                                               

                                                         

                                                              6

·          Includes minimal outside information and prior human growth and development knowledge in the construction of the essay and analysis of the document.

·          Risk of decisions not personalized.

 

 

                                                                  4

·          Relies exclusively on the documents.

 

 

·          Risk of decisions not personalized.

 

 

 

                                                               2

Scaffolding Questions

The degree to which the student fully responded to the questions and exhibited an understanding of a safe &  healthy environment.

H1A, ELA1.1D, NH3.3,NFCS15.1.1,

DM.C.1,.3,.5, AD.C.5,

·          Answered questions concisely, completely and thoroughly, and to the point.

 

·          Answers to questions recognize how individual behavior affects the quality of the environment

                                                                       4

·          Answered all of the questions adequately with little elaboration.

 

·          Answers to questions recognize how individual behavior affects the quality of the environment

                                                                3

·          Answered the questions partially and/or some questions remain unanswered and/or showed misunderstanding

·          Answers to questions fail to recognize how individual behavior affects the quality of the environment                2                                                           

·          Fulfilled few requirements of the task.

 

·          Answers to questions fail to recognize how individual behavior affects the quality of the environment                                    1                                                       

Use of Documents

The degree to which the student has used and incorporated the documents to demonstrate how risk reduction strategies and multiple influences affect health decisions.

 

H1C,D, ELA1.1D,.2D, 

CDOS3a.A

AD.C.5,.7,

·          Skillfully grouped documents according to vision of the role, responsibility, reality of parenthood.

·          Strategically cites and uses the information in the documents by prioritizing /grouping to show interrelationships.

·          Includes all the necessary and only relevant document information.

·          Cites and analyzes all documents and their meaning.                                    4

·          Groups the documents according to vision of the role, responsibility and reality of parenthood.

·          Prioritizes or groups the documents using appropriate criteria but without an explicit attempt at showing interrelationship among them.

·          Includes all necessary and some extraneous information.

·          Cites and analyzes all documents and their meaning.                          3

·          Refers to documents in chronological order.

 

·          Relies on descriptions of the documents’ meaning with some scattered attempts at analysis.  Shows misunderstanding of  documents.

 

·          Includes both relevant and irrelevant information.

·          Fails to cite/analyze documents and their meaning.                                    2

·          Refers to the documents in a scattered fashion/ or not at all.

 

·          No attempt analysis.  Shows evidence that student understood few of the documents.

 

 

·          Includes much irrelevant information.

·          Fails to cite and analyze documents and their meaning.                           1

Graphic Organizer

The extent to which the student has used the “Data Boxes” Sheet to organize thoughts.

ELA1.2A,D, AD.C.5

·          Complete and developed, showing skillful organization of thoughts.

 

 

                                                                  4

·          Complete, showing a plan for writing.

 

 

                                                                3

·          Partially complete.

 

 

 

                                                                  2

·          Mostly inaccurate and /or incomplete.

 

 

                                                                1

Organization

The degree to which the essay is developed from beginning to end.

ELA1.2A,D, AD.C.5

·          Well-organized, clear focus.

 

·          Purposeful analytical structure.

                                                                  4

·          Logically sequenced, focused.

 

·          Clear attempt at organization.

·                                                                   3

·          Poorly developed essay, lacking focus.

·          Organization confuses reader.

                                                                  2

·          Vague or missing introduction /conclusion.

·          Organization confuses reader.

                                                   1

Presentation

The degree to which the essay is readable and clearly written to the target audience.

ELA1.2A

·          Fluent and easy to read. 

·          Correct spelling

·          Sense of engagement or voice addressing a future child.

                                                                  4

·          Clearly written and legible.

·          Few spelling errors but does not detract from the message.

·          Sense of engagement or voice addressing a future child.                3                                                  

·          Sloppy and/or carelessly written.

·          Many spelling errors that detracts from the message

·          Little sense of writing to a child of the future.                                                 2

·          Illegible.

·          Many spelling errors which confuse the reader and detract from the message.

·          Little engagement or voice.             1

                                                                                                                                                                       

 

PARENTING EDUCATION SEQUENTIAL PLAN

The Role, Responsibility and Reality of Parenting DBQ

 

Parenting Standard(s): I , II

Grade:  9-12

Discipline:  Health Education

Essential Question (s): 

I.  When is a person ready to parent?

II. How do adult choices in meeting the physical,  emotional, intellectual, social and spiritual needs of a child affect a child’s health and safety?

# of lessons: 

·         ¼ lesson /approx. 15-20 min. explanation

·         individual mentoring as needed

Length of periods:  80 min.

 

Lesson Components:

Day 1 

Day 2-7

 

Guiding Question (s)

 

IF.   What are the roles / responsibilities adults assume when they become parents?

IP.   What are the consequences of parenting practices on children, the family and society?

IIH. How do understanding theories of human growth and development  (Maslow, Piaget,   

       Erickson, Kohlberg) and Youth Development  approaches (Benson, Pitman, Werner)   

       affect adult choices in relating to children?

IIIJ. What caregiving conditions are necessary to promote a child’s health, safety and positive  

        development?

 

 

Activities

 

Teacher explanation /directions for independent DBQ writing assignment and use of rubric:

1.      Analyze documents

2.      Collect relevant information

3.      Organize thinking using “Data Boxes,” graphic organizer

4.      1st draft

5.      Use rubric to self-assess

6.      Final copy

Individual mentoring

as needed

 

Skills Assessed

AD.C.5

DM.C.3,.5,.6

PG.C.5,.11


Learning Standards

and Performance

Indicators

H1 ACD                                ELA1.1D                                   NH 3.1, 3.3, 6.1, 6.3

H2 A,B,C                              ELA1.2A,D                               NFCS 15.1.1,.2,.3

FCS 3A                                 CDOS3a.1A                                          15.2.1,.2,.3                                      


Assessment Tool(s)

Scaffolding Questions

Graphic Organizer

Essay / Rubric

Reflection Question(s)

 

        How have the documents changed my perception of the responsibilities of parenthood?

IA.   How ready am I for parenthood?

 


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